this is decent. I feel like this could have been a bit better if you spoke the words more clearly. the vocals should be redone to make it sound higher quality. and the art is good, the line art is really good. and the character designs are very colorful and vibrant. the animation is a bit stiff at some parts, or just overall. some key poses have been skipped over, but hell for all i know that could have the style your going for. what i would do is redo the vocal and mixing. this looks good, but it can just be done so much better. and if you put in the work you can make something great!